Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Olivia's Narrative

The Snow Ball

Once upon a time there was a polar bear called Snowy because he was as white as snow. There was a penguin called Fluffy because she was very fluffy, an Eagle called lightning because he was as fast as lightning. There was also a changing snowball called Fire because he could change into any kind of ball that he wanted. There was also a snake called Scale because he was covered in scales.

They all lived in the icy cold Antarctica. They could smell the salty water they could see big icicles they could hear the sweet sound of the waves. One day the snow ball changed into a fire ball and chased everyone into an ice cave. Then he threw ice rocks over the entry and covered the entry!
They all felt scared but Scale did not feel scared at all. They threw rocks to see if they could break the ice they could see nothing but ice.

While they were in the cave Fluffy laid an egg and then everyone fell asleep. While they are asleep Scale comes and takes the egg. There was a little hole big enough for Scale to fit through while he was going through he broke some and then Lightning wakes up and goes after Scale. He gets the egg but falls to the ground. The others find him and help him up. Just then they find a magic trapdoor and go through to the snow ball and they danced and danced until they were tired out. They were about to leave when the egg hatches and out comes a baby penguin. Fluffy called it Peach. Peach was very cute he was the most adorable thing in the world!

They left and went back to there house and what did they see SCALE! He was sitting at the front porch waiting for them to come home. As soon as he saw them he ran up and just missed Peach. Lightning put Scales favourite food into the ice cave and then Scale went after it finally Scale was in the ice cave eating. While he was eating they covered the entrance with massive rocks and when Scale was finished eating he realised he just had been paid back for being naughty. He was now a prisoner in the ice cave and everyone except Scale lived happily ever after. THE END

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